It a little too monotone. It would be nice to have some contrast between the painted parts, and the bright/chrome parts. Also, I'd work on trying to define a focal point. Right now, it would be the headlight because of the color and contrast, but it is lacking detail compared to the rest of the bike. Oh and not to be picky, but the exhaust should come out of the cylinder heads, not the main motor housing.
i knew you would catch that exhaust... its a must fix. thanks for all the feedback. when I finish my work work I will improve the image. The exhaust will be fixed (so stupid)
styling wise, the exhaust looks better as it is now, but mechanically it is wrong. If the motor was more futuristic looking, you could get away with it anywhere you wanted it...
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Cool! I like the clean geometric gas tank + internals. But not too crazy about the head lamp. Maybe it is just color.(blue)
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looks good. i want to see more!
ReplyDeleteI agree. I am updating it. it needs more BMW like lights.
ReplyDeleteIt a little too monotone. It would be nice to have some contrast between the painted parts, and the bright/chrome parts. Also, I'd work on trying to define a focal point. Right now, it would be the headlight because of the color and contrast, but it is lacking detail compared to the rest of the bike. Oh and not to be picky, but the exhaust should come out of the cylinder heads, not the main motor housing.
ReplyDeletei knew you would catch that exhaust... its a must fix. thanks for all the feedback. when I finish my work work I will improve the image. The exhaust will be fixed (so stupid)
ReplyDeletestyling wise, the exhaust looks better as it is now, but mechanically it is wrong. If the motor was more futuristic looking, you could get away with it anywhere you wanted it...
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